what a beautiful story and yet it's not over in any case I really liked it

OMG looks super cute, I'll give it a try.

Salut je suis un peu nouveau mais je vais être direct déjà je viens de finir le nouveau chapitre incroyable Master Class insane le VN elle-même et incroyable le début jusqu'à la fin beaucoup d'émotions le scénario les script les animations des personnages ou l'environnement incroyable j'ai bien aussi aimé les recettes ça va m'aider à devenir un très bon patricien (surtout à mes BF) (*idiot de puro x) c'est juste incroyable Paul-Loup et enfin bf avec Charles franchement je suis heureux je suis aussi heureux parce que en finale tu t'améliores en anglais ou en français je sais pas du tout quelle langue de base tu es mais je te félicite d'avoir créé ce VN franchement si j'avais une note à te donner ça serait au moins un dix étoiles mais on peut pas du coup je te donne 5 étoiles franchement tu m'as comblé je resterai à l'écoute jusqu'à au futur mise à jour et aussi bonne chance pour le game Jay même si tu participes ou tu participes pas même si tu gagnes ou tu gagnes pas c'est pas grave en tous les cas tu t'amuses et tu t'améliores c'est tout passe une bonne soirée passe une bonne journée je repasserai plus tard si tu m'as laissé un commentaire ici et aussi (Puromaru) si tu vois ce message tu as intérêt de laisser un commentaire sympathique

J'ai parcouru ton récit et j'ai lu ça comme un véritable "thriller".  Beaucoup de suspense et de surprises !  La qualité du français en passant est très bien.  Je ne veux pas entrer dans les détails pour ne pas vendre la mèche. C'est au lecteur de découvrir tout ça. L'intrigue est là et bien ancrée.  On voit que les personnages ont été bien travaillés.  Tu étais certainement bien inspiré !  Chapeau pour cette créativité !  
J'ai bien hâte de voir la suite du récit ; )
Bravo encore !

Great VN, the story is engaging, the characters are great and the production value has no right being this high when it's the product of only one artist !

Keep up the good work 💪

Why did the ratatouille recipe not make it to the cooking den?

i found a text where it says that there is an nsfw secret in chapter 6 in a cave but I cant find it, or I'm just dum lol, any help? :3

   I've played many visual novels before playing this one, and this one is definitely one of my favorites. Unfortunately, most of the good furry visual novels are usually made by a small team - or just one person - so they don't have that much support.

   I've known about this visual novel for quite a while before actually playing it. The main reason was because most of the small visual novels have either been abandoned or just has a short story. But this one seems to be getting finished ( I hope )

   Another thing is I was surprised by was the story of this one. Most of the stories in the more popular visual novels are mainly just some guy in college dealing with mental health and all that - Im not saying that's bad,  just repetitive. So I liked this one for featuring more than that. The whole idea about wolves going extinct a long time ago and you and some other guy are the only ones left is a really scary idea.

   Although, the game can use some touch-ups.

   The art is really nice, it's a style I don't normally see. But, some of the character's sprites- especially Charles - have their shoulders a little to up; giving them an unnatural look. If you decide to consider this, then I drew a quick example of what I'm referring to:

   When someone draws shoulders, they should normally be slanted. I'm pretty sure you can find a better tutorial somewhere else, but I wanted to inform you of this. I drew a red triangle on the right drawing to help show what I mean. The shoulders should be lower than the neck, otherwise it looks stiff and pretty uncomfortable. I suggest you look for a tutorial on YouTube or some other website if you wish for a better explanation.

   The father of the hyena's sprite seems to have this little thing applied, so im not sure if you're aware of this already. But oh well...

   The English translation in the earlier chapters could also use some work.

   Besides that, this game was by far one of the best ones that I played - and I played a lot. Thank you for making this, and I will wait patiently for the next update. Thank you! ":3

First time commenting and I must say, your game is the most unique I found here with more POVs than just the MC and the references and out of the box things you are just great. Love this work and excited to read the next chapter.

Just finished reading the new Chapters, love the new turn the story is taking. 

Hey,on the android version the text overflow bwyond the screen down there

Et bien et bien la Communauté française toujours ici toujours à l'écoute et bien j'ai aimé j'ai recommencé le jeu pour être sûr d'avoir tous les recettes de plus j'ai bien aimé les deux nouveaux chapitres il y avait vraiment un sentiment de tristesse du dégoût et de la colère de plus j'ai bien aimé découvrir le secret et l'histoire de Martin et de ça cicatrice en tout cas je n'ai pas de suggestion à rajouter je ne peux rien dire je peux pas critiquer c'était juste parfait voilà j'espère que tu as aimé lire ce commentaire :)

Et frérot je me suis amusé sur ton VN vraiment l'histoire est très drôle du début jusqu'à la fin mais surtout (appeler un médecin pour la amis de Paul-Loup) il veut sortir avec son prof mais on est où xD

Love the vn when the next release

One of the best vns I've ever read. The writing is good and the arts are very charismatic. The songs are also great, it fits well with the atmosphere. There's only one thing that bothered me while reading, but it didn't bother me that much. In the Android version, I don't know about the others, there seems to be a problem with the text box, it only contains three lines of dialogue and the rest is off screen. I don't know if it's because of my cell phone or what, but either way it doesn't interfere much with understanding the story. 

Well, anyway, good work and thanks for your work and those involved.

Wonderful VN, the story and art has me wanting so much more, can't wait for the next chapters ^ ^

Vraiment pas mal du tout et merci pour la VF ^^

Wanna let you know that the android version has some problem.

Mainly the text box, where the text is lower that usual. So in some long text it just crop down to the point of unreadable. Can you fix it or is there a way to fix it?

my head canon is after Charles he stacks the rocks, he lifts into a pile making sure they don't tumble on the ground like a fun activity to do when he's bored

why is the wolfs back after 400 ish years the fail safe duh on a scholar eclipse the power of the warewolf or wolf god  hits the feral wolf to hide it its takes years to have a anthro wolf but the feral hide more and have more human like thing like being alive as long as a anthro  and small stuff idk how ppl dont get this

Aww this is just getting very interesting..

the animation is quiet lively too <3 *wink *wink

I'm looking forward for the next update XD

Will there be android version soon ? sorry bad english

I'm starting to worry about what paul loup will be next but i hope he finds out. but first I really like the game you made, this game is already in my favorites list. Keep up the good work. and don't care about hater you work is very good ^^

As I sit here typing away on my phone, I can't help but feel a twinge of frustration. You see, there's a game out there that I've been dying to play called Alones - it's the only thing I can think about lately. But there's one problem: it's only available on PC. And unfortunately for me, I don't have a PC.

I've been saving up for what seems like forever, but every time I get close to having enough money for a decent computer, something comes up. My car breaks down, I have to pay for textbooks for school, or I need to replace a broken appliance in my apartment. It seems like there's always something preventing me from reaching my goal.

And so, I'm left with my trusty phone. It's a great phone, don't get me wrong - but it's just not the same as playing games on a big computer screen. I've tried finding similar games on Android, but they're just not the same.

I know it sounds silly to get so worked up over a game, but sometimes it feels like it's the only thing I have to look forward to. I work long hours at a job I don't love, and my social life is pretty non-existent. So, when I hear about a new game that I think I'll really enjoy, it's like a little glimmer of hope.

But for now, I'll just have to make do with what I have. I'll keep typing away on my phone, daydreaming about the day when I can finally afford a PC and play all the games I've been missing out on. And who knows - maybe one day I'll look back on this time and laugh, remembering how silly it was to get so worked up over a game. But for now, it's important to me, and that's all that matters.

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merci pour la vf

No android😔😢😭

Where do I report grammar mistakes?

oh i just got here and now it's out I can't wait to play this and Post this! oh! Btw I'm part of Discord and it has a News Space I use so i'll tell Everyone there about you! i Hope Your VN does well! Link out! oh one more thing, if you want to chat in discord here's a Link to where if you can command check it out there aren't a lot of people that talk there but it's nice hope to see you there! :D
 https://discord.gg/REZs637e

Hey there Wacky! checking in on you and hope your not stressed out trying to get this game out

i can't wait to see what this game looks like! so do your best out there, and hey no pressure ok? everyone knows how long a demo tasks to come out so no need to rush to get it done alright ;) Link out`

How's the demo coming along? :D

Any thoughts on making a discord server? I'd love to join it :3

Excited for build 1!